Friday, May 4, 2007

dead

a broken heart
givin by my best friend
im fallin apart
my life has come to an end
please forgive me i just cant go on
tears are what i see
with the commin of dawn
the sun comes out
i start to cry
i want to shout
i want to die
you killed my soul
with a jagged knife
dug my hole
and took away my life
the last i seey
our stunning face
we will never be
so amoung the dead i take my place

3 comments:

Moose on the Loose said...

Liz, I think you should be the next Shakespeare. :-) Your poems are soo good. Write a book and be a famous!!! I love ya sooo sooo much. Keep posting

Moose on the Loose said...

Liz!
OH MY GOODNESS!!! DID YOU HEAR?
ok get ready.......

THE SPICE GIRLS ARE GOING ON A REUNION TOUR AROUND CHRISTMASTIME!!!!

just thought you might want to know...

miss ya!

The Redheaded Bandit said...

nice poem.